Showing posts with label First Drafts. Show all posts
Showing posts with label First Drafts. Show all posts

Thursday, 10 February 2011

First Draft DPS.

DPS



For my DPS, firstly, I had a vague idea of what the layout would look like from my mock-ups. I liked the idea of a larger image on one page, with the text and title on the other. I thought about swapping the pages around, although I felt that it was best that the title of the article was the first thing the reader saw when they turned the page.
There were quite a few images I tried out to be full scale on the page although I came to the decision of using the blazer one against the window. I like how the wall adds lighting, how the artist is large in the frame and how there is a slight bit of the broken factory window in the background without looking too grimy.

Wednesday, 9 February 2011

First Draft Content.

Contents






Before creating my contents page on Photoshop, I decided that it was best to look at existing contents pages of music magazines, my main inspiration was from Rolling Stone.
I felt that the layout of the magazine worked well, as I was inspired by some of the contents pages from Rolling Stone. The main image and feature underneath was something that I think worked well as it immediately makes it noticeable of what the main feature is. The brief introduction of the article underneath, I feel, would make a reader want to continue to read the full article, I did this also under the smaller second feature 'RedHed'.
I feel that both of the images work well together on the page, not overpowering one another, and the white background with bl;ac writing on top adds a classic and stylish look. This is something I have also been inspired to do by many music magazines.
I decided to brand on the page, at the top, as I found that many music magazines also did this as well as using the main subheadings of 'features', 'news', and, 'reviews', towards the bottom of the page.
The larger page numbers on top of the images were something that I found to be apparent a lot with Rolling Stones contents pages. When placing these, I lined them up again with the white of the background to continue the 'house-style' seen on the cover with the border and cover lines.

First Draft Cover.

Cover 1






cover 2


I submitted two First Draft Covers as I was torn between two of the ones that I had produced, because of each of their different looks, and the fact that I wanted to use both shots preferably somewhere in the magazine.
I feel that the first cover is much darker than the second although, I feel that the image is correct to the rules of photography and the artist is almost more involved with the image, leaning into the lens slightly more. I also feel that this one has an overall 'together' feel about it, the cover lines, masthead and image all fitting together well.
On this image, I used the 'Clone Stamp' tool on Photoshop to airbrush the skin of the artist slightly, to just give a more professional look to the magazine, I also highlighted areas of the skin using the 'Dodge' tool, along with editing the lighting curves and lowering the saturation of the image.
I cropped the image before placing it, and took a section from the top of the image and manipulated it in the 'Filter Gallery' using a technique to give an artistic feel to the magazine cover. I also saturated this piece before placing it at the top of the cover. I then added another panel underneath this one, which I decided to colour just black, a black which I selected from my main image using the 'Eyedropper Tool'. I downloaded and installed my fonts and placed my masthead over the panels. I felt that a choice of white will stand out and is a classical contrast to black, I also used this on my cover lines etc.
The choice to put a border around my magazine, and the other pages inside came from some magazines that I have previously seen. I started to mess around with the positioning of the masthead and decided that I could merge it into the lines at the side, which could be considered to be the 'house-style' of the magazine, as well as the white border around the page.
I added what I thought to be minimal cover lines as I wanted the magazine to stand out and appear similar to some of the magazines that I looked at previously. The artist cover line, I wanted to stand out, making it clear that this was the main feature of the magazine and also by 'name dropping', I could increase the sales of magazines possibly. I lined up the white cover lines to the white border to give an edge house-style also.
I added a bar code for authenticity, as well as the price, Issue, and date at the top of the magazine cover. I did this in a small font to make my magazine appear professional and realistic.

The second cover that I submitted was pretty much identical although the image has changed and the artist cover line has changed and had moved slightly. I did this as the white did not show up as well on the image.
I like this image as the artist is wearing the jacket and reminds me of a 'Dazed & Confused' cover that I was inspired by at the start of the project. Although,I feel that possibly the artist may appear too distant from the cover in a way, and possibly too small. I feel that although I do like this cover as well, the first cover seems to be held together better and has an overall better aesthetic.